literature

Choking On Nothing

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Take my holographic
expression and bend it into
any shape
you feel like, because
                           today
I want you to be happy.

The ocean will come and go and
the stinging nettles
will bite,
but I'll be
here and I'll keep
smiling
for you. Take hold

of my hand and
I know
I don't know all the answers,
but I'll try my best
to stop you from choking.
And now it seems that I have found
nothing at all.
I wanna hear your voice out loud,
slow it down, slow it down.
Without it all
I'm choking on nothing,
it's clear in my head
that I'm screaming for something.
Knowing nothing is better than knowing it all.

The Used - On My Own.

I think you should be happy, because being sad ist nicht gut. (:

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Do the stanza breaks work, or would the poem flow better if the lines were together and there were no breaks?
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londonrey's avatar
I like "I know I don't know all the answers" -- The line break after I know really makes the phrasing pop out, lovely! I like the title of this one a lot too. (: